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Summaries vs. Retellings FREEBIE!

As many of you already know, I am finishing up my FINAL grad school course as we speak.  I may or may not have a slight case of “senioritis”.  Who knew that you could come down with THAT in GRAD SCHOOL?!

Anyway, I’m spending the day off working on projects and papers to try to get ahead and get DONE!  As I was sifting through my paperwork, I found a graphic organizer that I’ve been meaning to share with all of you!  Disclaimer:  This was NOT my brain child.  I WISH I had thought of it though, because it is BRILLIANT!

We hit summarizing pretty hard in third grade… right out of the gates.  Most of the kids give GREAT retellings… but they struggle with writing concise summaries.  Every single year, I spend LOTS of time teaching them the difference.  I’ve always relied on using familiar fairy tales like “The Three Little Pigs” to do a retelling since 99.9% of my students have heard it many times by third grade.  Then, after hooking them… by the hairs on their chinny chin chins… I summarize it.  I give them the gist of the story.  Short & sweet.  Then, I always ask, what was the difference between my retelling and my details?  Someone is always quick to point out that my summary is kind of similar to giving the main idea… and I leave lots of details out.  This has worked pretty well for me, but friends, just wait till you see this organizer!

My professor is absolutely fabulous, first of all.  I spend a lot of time reading about reading, because I have a bit of a love affair with literacy, so I don’t always hear NEW ideas, per se, but I definitely gain perspective and understand more deeply.  Every now and then, she comes out of nowhere with some crazy-brilliant-fabulous idea… and this is just one example.

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This is how it works!  Before reading a book, pass out the graphic organizer.  Take a moment to show your students how it is set up… and how there are lines for each story element.  Next, tell the students to jot down details that they want to remember on the lines outside of the diamond as you read.  (I think it would be great to add a retelling afterward… to have the kiddos turn and talk to each other and share their retellings of the story after looking over their notes.)  Then,  ask them to jot down one sentence in each section of the diamond to describe the setting, the characters, the problem, and the solution.  After that. have the students cut or fold around the diamond to remove the extraneous details.  Explain that this is how a summary works.  A summary tells the main points or the gist without the extra details.  Viola!  A visual representation of summaries!  If you’ve been following along for a while, you know how much I love tangible concrete models for comprehension!  Isn’t this fabulous!?  It’s the best thing I’ve learned all semester!  I’ve retyped it to share with all of you, so if you want a copy, click on the picture to snag it for FREE!  Let me know what you think! 🙂 

Comments

  2. The Malloy Family says

    Thank you! Seriously, summarizing and retelling is KILLING ME. Granted, I'm just homeschooling mine so I don't have 25 kids, but my 3rd grader is just not getting it (bangs head on wall). I think this will really help!

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  7. Kelly and Jeff Koonce says

    This is awesome!! I love the physical act of cutting away the details. My thirdsters always struggle with summary year after year and I finally feel like I have something that will make me feel confident in teaching it and help cement the concept. Thank you SO MUCH for offering it for free!! You are the BEST!!

    -Kelly K

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  14. Kelly Koonce says

    Amanda,

    I wanted to let you know that I actually used this today for the story "Pushing Up the Sky" in Reading Street. The kids LOVED it!!! When they saw me actually cut away the details on my model, it clicked. When they were able to cut away the details themselves, it clicked even more. It worked well because the story had a clear problem and solution. I cannot thank you enough for this freebie!!!! I can't wait to use it with other fiction stories!

    I am attempting to start a blog… it's in its bare beginnings now, and I don't know all the rules of the bloggy world yet… can I share this idea on my blog (with a link to you, of course!!!) so other teachers can have this freebie??? I'll wait to post anything until I have your permission. 🙂

    Thanks, again!!!

    Kelly K

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  15. Melissa says

    Wow! What can I say… what looks so simple is right on the money! Thank you for sharing such a valuable resource. I can't wait to try it out with my kiddos. Just today we were working on figuring out the difference between both.
    Thanks again,
    :0) Melissa
    More Time 2 Teach

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  18. Teresa Cotton says

    I will have to tell you that I love this graphic organizer! I have used it with students and have it displayed on my wall. Great for when they have to retell during Dibels!! Love it!

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  19. Anonymous says

    I recently learned about a new strategy called" Somebody wants but so……..
    I made it into a gaphic organizer (a table)
    Somebody: character
    Wants: action to be taken
    But: problem
    So: solution
    My kids used ot struggle with summary. They loved this strategy (no details here) short and to the point.

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